Hey everyone!
Elevator Pitch
Here is my general elevator pitch for the class to watch. I've been pretty sick for the past week so that is why I sound congested and sort of monotoned in the video. However, I tried my best for it. I decided to upload through Youtube because Blogger was weird in uploading a video directly through the post editor.
Sean,
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job keeping the elevator pitch right around the 90 second target time. That can certainly be a difficult thing to do, but you were able to accomplish that.
I'm not sure if this was your first elevator pitch or not, but this was my first time doing a recorded elevator pitch. Although it can be difficult to do so, I would recommend trying to change the wording a bit when stating your credentials. By rephrasing the stating of some of your accomplishments/credentials, I think that the audience may be slightly more intrigued.
Good work!
Sean,
ReplyDeleteFirst off, great job being aware of the 90 second mark for your pitch, I struggled a lot with meeting this time period. Also, I think you did a good job of expressing all of your skills and showcasing what fields you have experience in. However, I would recommend trying to make your attributes flow together when presenting them. This may help improve your credibility to others when presenting your attributes thoroughly.
Great work on this elevator pitch!